Message testing
Find the words that land with buyers
Test taglines, value propositions and campaign lines with the people you need to persuade. See which ones are clear, believable and different, and hear why in people's own words.
Line 2 of 14
Lower bills without thinking about itA home that learns your routineSet it once. Save all year.
Brand A smart thermostat
What you meant"It saves energy on its own."
What they heard"It watches when I come and go?"
Why test the line
What you mean is not always what people hear
A line that reads well in a meeting room can sound vague, hard to believe or just like a competitor. Message testing compares what you meant with what people actually take away, before the line goes on a website, a pack or a billboard. It shows where a message lands and where it falls short.
What can go on the bench
Meant versus heard
Watch a line meet the people it must persuade
- 01The lines, written alike
- 02What did it tell you?
- 03Scores, next to what they heard
- 04Where a line is misread
Step 1 / 4
The lines, written alike
Similar in length and style, so the comparison is fair. We go through the wording with you first.
Study set-up
Message testing
- StimulusFourteen lines about a smart thermostat
- WhoUS homeowners
- TaskSets of four: the most and the least convincing
- ThenThe top three rated, and explained in people's words
- Read byAge bands, to see where a line splits
Set up with our team, or yourself in CatalyseAI
Step 2 / 4
What did it tell you?
People pick the most and least convincing lines, then say in their own words what a line means to them.
Line 2 of 3
In your own words, what is this line telling you?
"A home that learns your routine"
How believable is this line?
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- 2
- 3
- 4
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Not at allCompletely
"Lower bills without thinking: yes please."
"Learns my routine sounds a bit creepy."
"Set it once, save all year. Simple."
Voice answer
AI follow-up: How do you feel about that?
"A bit uneasy. I would want to know what it keeps."
- Length
- Words
- Topic relevance 0.82
Transcribed, checked and searchable. Up to three follow-ups per answer.
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Scores, next to what they heard
Clarity, belief and appeal for each leading line, set next to what people say the line means.
Live tally, as answers arrive
- A"Lower bills without thinking about it"
They heard"Saves money on its own."
- Clarity82%
- Believability61%
- Appeal70%
- B"A home that learns your routine"
You meant"It saves energy on its own."
They heard"It watches when I come and go."
- Clarity64%
- Believability55%
- Appeal66%
- C"Set it once. Save all year."
They heard"Easy, and cheaper bills."
- Clarity85%
- Believability58%
- Appeal62%
Top-two-box shares. "They heard" is the answer people gave most often, in their own words.
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Where a line is misread
Setting what people heard next to what you meant shows the line that needs a rewrite.
The scorecard
Every line scored, next to what people heard
Each row is one measure, named the way the report names it.
Base: US homeowners; the top three of fourteen lines, rated one at a time in a random order.
Top-two-box shares. Best-worst score: picked most convincing minus picked least, as a share of times shown.
The lead line
Example: choosing lines for a smart thermostat
A home-energy company has 14 lines about its smart thermostat, from "Lower bills without thinking about it" to "A home that learns your routine". US homeowners see the lines in sets of four and pick the most and least convincing in each set. The top three then go to a short follow-up in which people rate each line and say what it means to them. The team sees which lines lead overall, which ones split by age, and which one people misread before choosing what goes on the website.
Lower bills without thinking about it
Lead
Clear, relevant and the most convincing in the best-worst sets.
It goes on the website.
Set it once. Save all year.
Back-up
The clearest line, a little less believed.
Keep it for ads.
A home that learns your routine
Rework
It sounds new, but over-55s read it as the thermostat watching them.
Say what it learns, and why.
Ask the studyAnswers from your own data
Which line splits by age?
"A home that learns your routine" appeals to under-35s, but over-55s more often read it as the thermostat watching them. The gap is significant.
It checks its numbers against your data and draws the chart.
Step by step
How a message test runs
From a list of lines to the one that lands.
01
List the messages
Paste in your lines. They should be similar in length and style so the comparison is fair, and we go through the wording with you before fieldwork.
02
A few lines: rate each one
With a short list, each person rates the lines one at a time, in a random order, on clarity, believability, relevance and appeal.
03
Many lines: pick best and worst
With a long list, people see four lines at a time and pick the most and the least convincing. Every line ends up with a score and a rank, and you can see how far apart they are.
04
Ask what it means
People say in their own words what a line is telling them. Setting that next to what you meant shows where a line is misread.
05
Read the results by audience
Compare groups such as age bands or current and lapsed customers, then download the deck or the workbook.
Then: decide
"Learns your routine" is misread, so it gets a rewrite.
Plan your study
What you get
What you get
Output 01
Lines in order
Scores for each line on clarity, believability, relevance and appeal, or a best-to-worst ranking for a long list.
Output 02
What people heard
Each line's meaning in people's own words, grouped into themes and shown next to the meaning you intended.
Output 03
Word-level reactions
Show a longer statement as an image and ask people to click the words they find most convincing, then the words they doubt. The heatmap shows which phrases carry the line.
Output 04
Where audiences split
Up to five groups compared, with markers where a gap is statistically significant, so you can see when one line will not suit everyone.
Output 05
Ready-to-share files
The report as a PowerPoint deck, plus an Excel workbook, CSV data and PNG charts for your own slides.
FAQ
Questions, answered
How many messages can I test at once?
A short list can be rated line by line. For a longer list, a best-worst design works better, because people only compare four lines at a time. We suggest the route that fits your list.
How is this different from claims testing?
Claims testing checks product statements, such as "no added sugar", for belief and appeal. Message testing covers wider lines: taglines, value propositions and campaign ideas.
Can we hear why a line does not work?
Yes. People explain in their own words, and you can add video or audio answers in which an AI interviewer asks up to three follow-up questions. For longer conversations, ask us about interviews with our researchers.
Should I test lines on their own or inside an ad?
Start with the lines on their own to pick the strongest few. Once a line sits inside a finished ad, the visuals and voice change how it lands, so test the ad as a whole with video, static or audio ad testing.
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Goes well with
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Send us the messages and tell us who needs to believe them. We will suggest the simplest test that gives you a clear answer.
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